Will You Be My Love!

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Added: 13-Oct-06

for my love.... who is lovely as these flowers.
Love u baby!!

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Will You Be My Love!

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Real nice!
Dont pay attention to all the asshats around here who cant say a nice word to a guy who deserved it.
Its a really great video and im sure your girlfriend liked it a lot!
By -=AsMoDeUs=- 1161028606 Reply Spam [+1] Moderate Up Moderate Down Remove ~~2877453~~
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This probably...
...wasn't the best place to post this kind of thing, lots of people here would rather be ass holes then critique this type of vid. as you can see by all the filtered comments.

Assuming you posted it to be critiqued:

I wouldn't have said "I love you" as much - you can symbolize it with the pictures instead. "A picture speaks more then 1000 words." You could have also used some pictures besides flowers, such as two creatures together. An example would be two swans or something along the lines of that - you get my point. Also at the end you repeated one of the quotes, but the other one was new as far as I noticed, might want to try and keep it linear there. The ending just seemed a bit awkward with the scrolling quotes and no music playing in the background.

It was a good job though, even though it sounds like I'm just bitching about what you did wrong. I'm just giving my ideas and trying to help you out. I used this same type of movie to ask my GF to prom last year and she seemed to enjoy it. THNX for reading. -FF
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- Thanks Buddy!
  Ya you are right! Thanks for your beautiful comment.
  By Cyrus4fun 1160912137 Reply Spam [+0] Moderate Up Moderate Down Remove ~~2761797~~
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Should have mentioned before...

This video is only for only those with a bit of romantic sense...
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Nice video
Its a lovely sentiment elagantly expressed. Ignore the negative comments they come from sore losers with no girlfriend.
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Good Job
Dude. :)
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You're lucky
not everyone gets to be with the one that they love. I think you know that and feel lucky, you should.
-O
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Will You Be My Love!
Very very nice ! that girl its a very lucky girl
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I think
its a bit creepy, and ... stalkerish, forgive me. But hey, your girl might like this sort of stuff and if so, nice work. This would send my girl packing in a second!! send it to me QUICKLY!! Im joking... loves cool.
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- but really,
  send it.
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- Leave me an email on
  cyrus4fun@ rediffmail.com
  I will surely send it to you!
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- I fart
  I fart when my guy fokks me
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whats the name of the song...
piano piece name please.
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- the track!
  The sound track is from movie "My sassy Girl"
  awesome movie too check out!
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Excuse me
I've just thrown up
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