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This a 3D animated short film about of two mice. Two mice who face eminent death although neither knows it. It starts as a typical day with our main mouse watching some TV on his couch when he smells something. It is a fragrant smell that only a mouse could love.........Cheese!!!! He runs to the door to see this cheese sitting innocently on the kitchen floor, but what he does not see is the trap that lies beneath. Focusing only on the cheese he is determined to grab it at all costs. He disappears back into the hole and when he re-emerges he makes his way though the kitchen carefully and comically looking out for any danger. With a few twists, turns, jumps, dives, and various happenings he makes his way to the cheese when a small dark stranger appears. It is another mouse challenging him for what he feels is rightly his. From here the showdown ensues. They both fight with there best stuff until one emerges victorious and claims his prize; the cheese.
The mouse can dodge bullets, but not a gun thrown by another mouse? Whats up with that?
By Kramerica 1177110009 Reply Spam [+5] Moderate Up Moderate Down Removeit suppose to be comdey. afterall, the other mouse got caught in the trap, didn't he?
By bakaterra 1177135046 Reply Spam [+0] Moderate Up Moderate Down RemoveIt's good but it can be better , i don't like it very much but i will give you 5 starts because i know how much time it costs you to make this animation
By alus1onZ 1177106252 Reply Spam [+2] Moderate Up Moderate Down RemoveI'm sorry, it's obvious that a lot of work was put into this, but it's simply boring... I found my self fast forwarding after the first couple of minutes.
Sorry mate, but I suggest you get a decent script next time - and some decent (and appropriate) sound effects.
And in case you're wondering: Yes, I'm actually very familiar with animation work. I think I know what I'm talking about - my first animation is about 8 year old now.
:-)
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But seriously, that sounded like you got all of your sound fx from a $35.00 casio keyboard.
The entire animation ran too slow also. was almost painful to wait through each scene.
Oherwise your off to a good start !
skip the first minute of title and the last minute too. apart from that its ok
By steveoplymouth 1177189073 Reply Spam [+0] Moderate Up Moderate Down Removefor a simple story... if ur gonna hav a simple story use simple animation. for the length and difficulty in this animation u wanna hav a better story cos it clashes
technically was very gud animation tho
try get some inspiration from PIXAR.
By costin147 1177152104 Reply Spam [+0] Moderate Up Moderate Down RemoveI like the idea and I think you worked a lot to create this clip but you should work more on their face expression.
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