It Was Starting to Rhyme

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It Was Starting To Rhyme Short Film Students Musicians Guitar Music Teardrop Jose
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A Short Student film directed and developed by Dylan Maranda... based of a written piece by Dylan the film tells the story of a lone musician... Marcus Berelowitz Acts

This is the written piece it was based off:

It Was Starting To Rhyme By Dylan Maranda

It kinda all started when I got my first guitar, writing songs at the tender age of fourteen. Chords, lyrics and notes all fired into the right side of my brain like a cannon. Then it was like I jumped on a god damn roller coaster.

Lyrics, thoughts, mind-mouth-page. Places I had never dared to reach became chords, became music, First gig, I sang from the heart. A nightmare was something that would pull me away from my music, what makes me tick. A, B, C, D# Blows to the head, my mind is dead. Nothing comes out, Ive hit an end. Bags of green flash, smoke everywhere. Ive gone so low I cant take the way Im going....it is like a deep pit. Will someone help me out of what I have become! I cant go on. But music brings me back. I pick up my guitar instead of drugs. A saving grace that puts me on the right track. Mind and music is one again. Surprised to see myself revised, new strength inside me builds, like soaring over hills. It was starting to rhyme. Strings and frets combined like space and time. Record deals, pay checks, dreams becoming a reality. Slip. Fall. Down to depths unknown the realization that we need a microscope to see ourselves in a world as big as ours sets in. I cant go on. There is nothing for me here; this is bullshit. deaths face starts to look pretty when you stare at it so much. I get caught in the moment. A bit too much. Istart to trip. Its like I hear a melody but I cant hear where its coming from. Stars start to dance before my eyes. I start to fall into nothing... nothing at all.

(the poor grammar is intended)

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